Barclay can be a hit or miss for me and this is a miss! a big miss and a big mess
Too many POV happening and too much 'thoughts' or descriptions of things I don't care about and I don't want to know about tools or cars etc
Too messy for me, he can write a better story in a better format than this one
Too many POV happening and too much 'thoughts' or descriptions of things I don't care about and I don't want to know about tools or cars etc
Too messy for me, he can write a better story in a better format than this one
