Debbie B. (orchid7) -
The story started out well. I really liked Kyler. He is a very sweet guy, and I admire him for being willing to open himself up again to the possibility of getting his heart broken again just so that he could have one last chance with his high school sweetheart.
The problem I had with the story was the heroine, Bree. I thought she was a very selfish person. I didn't buy her reasoning for breaking Kyler's heart the first time around, and I grew tired of reading the same "excuses" over and over as to why she was having so much trouble making a decision. She irritated me, and I don't think she deserved such a nice guy. The story ended up being just ok for me.
The problem I had with the story was the heroine, Bree. I thought she was a very selfish person. I didn't buy her reasoning for breaking Kyler's heart the first time around, and I grew tired of reading the same "excuses" over and over as to why she was having so much trouble making a decision. She irritated me, and I don't think she deserved such a nice guy. The story ended up being just ok for me.
