Very gritty, and dark. It was good overall but there were things that stood out.
Things that Stands out so far-
- what happened after she went out the bathroom window and before running from Rack...
- grammar needs to re-looked over again, loads of places didn't read out right to many words in sentences that don't need to be there OR sentences just don't make any sense...
- overused of the word bitch, all women including mother's are being called bitches even right to their faces and they are okay with it...
- Megan- Meggie- is 18 and gets treated like a child, Christopher 'Outlaw' is almost 33 and thinks he's king pin of the place... BTW his mother is 47, from my calculations she was 14 or 15 when she had him and he has older sisters? Something don't add up right...
- Outlaw will and do get one of his favorites under him no matter if he has Megan in his bed and don't deny after Megan and him are together that he won't stop being with another if the mood strikes him. Cheating player...
-she's been abused by her stepfather but Outlaw is emotionally abusive towards Megan and yet she still gives in moments after he puts her down he gets what he wants...
Things that Stands out so far-
- what happened after she went out the bathroom window and before running from Rack...
- grammar needs to re-looked over again, loads of places didn't read out right to many words in sentences that don't need to be there OR sentences just don't make any sense...
- overused of the word bitch, all women including mother's are being called bitches even right to their faces and they are okay with it...
- Megan- Meggie- is 18 and gets treated like a child, Christopher 'Outlaw' is almost 33 and thinks he's king pin of the place... BTW his mother is 47, from my calculations she was 14 or 15 when she had him and he has older sisters? Something don't add up right...
- Outlaw will and do get one of his favorites under him no matter if he has Megan in his bed and don't deny after Megan and him are together that he won't stop being with another if the mood strikes him. Cheating player...
-she's been abused by her stepfather but Outlaw is emotionally abusive towards Megan and yet she still gives in moments after he puts her down he gets what he wants...
